Friday, August 13, 2010

Too Long - 55

I long for the sound of your voice undistorted by technology and distance.

I yearn for the touch of your skin, fingers, hands, arms and the rest.

I need for the kiss of your lips grabbing my soul and pulling it close.

A week is too long, but so is a day and an hour.

This was for my wife who has been gone for a week but now returns to my arms where she belongs!

What can you say in 55 words? Give it a try or just read more, go see g-man.
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19 comments:

  1. smiles. mine are getting ready to leave for the weekend...so only 2 days but long enough. smiles. nice 55.

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  2. This is lovely, Austin. Did you share this with her? What a lovely homecoming. :)
    Nice 55!
    -C

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  3. warm one... packed with love,,, wish you a good time...
    nice write

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  4. Austin - this was beautiful - loved the line...grabbing my soul and pulling it close... that expresses so much - really nice!!

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  5. Romance is dominating the 55's this week, 4shor!

    Enjoyed yours. Mine is up too.

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  6. Poetic men are the bomb!

    Wonderful 55.

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  7. I tell that to my wife - the poetry in my soul is in my writing. She just sniffs. To hear or read my non-PC illustrated Friday 55 click here. Warning you may have to read the footnote after to make sense of it!

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  8. :) That is sweet! At least she is back to where she belongs :)

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  9. Wow, this is so beautiful. Fabulous 55. Glad she's back.

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  10. Aww, that is so sweet. It's exactly how I feel when my hubby and I are separated. Naughty text messages will only go so far, you know.

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  11. WOOT!!! You can feel the love with this. Beautifully done my friend and so sweet. :) Have a great Friday :)

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  12. Fantastic!
    Thats all I can say.
    There is no doubt about how much you love this woman.
    Excellent 55 y Friend.
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End!

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  13. Awww
    I know she is glad she has a man like you!!!

    nice 55

    moon smiles

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  14. Great 55 - she must be glad to be back.

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  15. Awww...this was soo romantic and passionate! You both must be so glad that she is back..

    Have a great weekend together! :)
    Lovely 55!

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  16. she must like knowing you miss her so much. glad the reunion has occurred by now.

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  17. This is beautiful. It's wonderful when you find someone in life whom you can't live without.

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  18. That is so sweet! Thank you for your lovely comment on my 55 about Gupta the stowaway.

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  19. Sweet 55. A week really is quite a while to be apart, but I think the occasional separation helps the appreciation. :)

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