Friday, July 30, 2010

55 - Lapse in Judgement

Oh, to have the lapse in judgment back that broke the practice I have perfected since being a child. My teeth, coming quickly together.  My lip, knowing it should retreat, yet tempting fate, trying for one last kiss of touch from my tongue.
Chomp . . . Wince . . . Tears . . . Blood.

Now a sore whose irritant is beyond imagined.

What can you say in 55 words? Give it a try or just read more, go see g-man.
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8 comments:

  1. PattiKenJuly 30, 2010 at 3:41 AM

    Ouch! And so ends many a romance.

    I’m up here.

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  2. John (@bookdreamer)July 30, 2010 at 3:43 AM

    It's so sore when that happens...Just a fun 55 today!

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  3. Brian MillerJuly 30, 2010 at 4:03 AM

    chomp....ouch! lol. nice 55 austin...smiles.

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  4. AnonymousJuly 30, 2010 at 8:24 AM

    I like it, the 55, that is... you've got me wincing in sympathy.

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  5. Monkey ManJuly 30, 2010 at 5:10 PM

    I have a tough time biting my tongue, too. Great 55.

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallJuly 30, 2010 at 6:58 PM

    vivid 55.
    best wishes.

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  7. G-ManJuly 30, 2010 at 7:07 PM

    C'Mon...
    It's not that bad is it?
    Friday 55 inspiration comes from the strangest places.
    Excellent Job My Friend...Rock On!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  8. ClaudiaJuly 31, 2010 at 12:30 AM

    ouch...sounds really painful...

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